So honestly? I can't really be arsed to look at that fic, as I do not care anymore. (Or maybe not I'm aware Marimo's gifting is not leadership but teaching, but then again leadership is one of those things you can learn.) Otherwise Marimo would not have been an instructor, she would have been a member of Valkyries. That kind of conceit is off-putting.Īlso it's still not canon-compliant Yuuko wants combat virgins. And then, when this was pointed out, he acted with smug conceit, insisting that he was correct when he was clearly wrong. The result is thus something that appears internally inconsistent.
The difference here is that what Hagoshod wrote (Izumi joining A-01) doesn't fit the verse and contradicts what has been established. Take the example of Tiberium Wars, Peptuck's novelisation of the epynomous game, which diverges from canon in several areas, but makes the effort to ensure that the changes make sense within the established framework set by the verse.
Thing is, in those cases it is acknowledged by the authors that divergences with canon are happening. Heck look how much the other fanfics posted in here totally disregard canon, and people just have fun with reading those eh?Ī fanfic is inherently diverging from canon by its very existence. I'm not sure anyone really cares anymore, canonical correctness is not exactly the point of fanfics anyway. Otherwise, sounds pretty interesting & can't wait to see the final product. Not unless there was a big regime change. Especially if it plays up to design strengths of other nations TSFs. Plus, if this is intended as American machine.well, Americans would never let anyone get this kind of technology.
I can imagine that someone would have the exact concept on their drawing boards in MuvLuv, but the technology required to make it would be absurdly expensive. So yes, monomolecular blades are not viable weapon.if it's meant to be a mass-produced TSF. And it's certainly not a small device like a blade. It took a specially designed quantum computer to get it under control. Gravity field is a side effect of using said BETA technology by American black ops weapon project - which was deemed as impractical, since then-current computers were unable to maintain the field, causing internal gravity on XGs to rip people apart. Both are also large, relatively fragile and require absurd amount of power to operate. So you are ok with particle cannons, fully automatic railguns and an anti-grav drive that also doubles as an energy shield but you draw the line with mono molecular blades ?įirst two of the above were made by Yokohama labs, fully abusing properties of BETA technology.